Pure Magic

“There!” Sherise said, taking a step back.

I turned cautiously toward the mirror to see the results. I pulled gently on a curl dangling over my shoulder. It sprang back when I released it. I smiled. I look…pretty, I thought to myself, feeling slightly surprised. Sherise dragged me over to the full length mirror. I swayed and turned in circles, admiring the soft pastel green dress that shimmered in the light. It felt so smooth against my skin. I hoped the rest of my night would be just as smooth.

An hour later I stood on the deck outside of the dance hall, hoping one of my dateless friends would show soon. Everyone said I should come even though I couldn’t date yet.
“We all dance with each other,” a friend had reassured me. Still, a knot was beginning to form in my stomach. Small, friendly private school or no, I felt somewhat silly going to Prom, the biggest dance of the year, without a boy escorting me.
The crunch of gravel beneath tires stirred me from my thoughts. I squinted into the approaching headlights, and sighed visibly as Jean stepped out of the car. We hugged, and made brave in each other’s dateless company, we entered the hall.

Immediate sounds of music and laughter entered my ears as we swung the huge wooden doors open. We were greeted with warm smiles and hello’s and soon I found myself dancing. First with Stan, then Mike and then Jim. As we danced I talked and giggled, but my eyes kept searching the room, for him. The one boy who gave me butterflies in my stomach whenever he looked my way.
I had been crushing on him for months now, well before he had asked my brother if I liked him. My dear brother simply told him what I had stated many times in conversations, “I dunno, but I know she isn’t interested in having a boyfriend.”
I’ve regretted many sentiments I’ve expressed over the years in an attempt to be different from other girls. But actual tears formed in my eyes as I saw my crush across the dance floor, Mary hanging on his arm. That could have been me.

As the song ended, I made my way to the D.J. to request my favorite slow song. I imagined Travis asking me to dance when it came on. He had still not noticed me.
I decided to make my way to the dessert table, where Travis and Mary were standing talking with some friends. Mary saw me first.

“Oh my gosh! You’re so pretty!” she exclaimed. (If she wasn’t such a nice person I would have hated her)
Then my eyes darted toward Travis. He was beaming. It was the biggest smile I had ever seen on his face and it was directed toward me.
“Nice,” he said, “you look so…nice.” he said shaking his head slightly as if amazed. I had the feeling if Mary wasn’t around he might have come up with something better than, nice. But it did the trick for me. I walked away from the table feeling thrilled.
As I rejoined my group of friends, I recognized the opening notes of the song I had requested, Dreaming my dreams by the Cranberries. The lights dimmed and I knew I had to dance to my favorite song. Before I could ponder on who to ask, I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around, stunned to find myself face to face with Travis.
“May I have this dance?” he asked, offering me his arm. I could only nod as I wrapped my arm around his and floated onto the floor. I still feel the magic, thinking of that blissful moment.

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Comments (16)

KimberlySeptember 22nd, 2007 at 11:12 pm

Oooo…I can feel the magic too! I just got shivers!

MelissaSeptember 22nd, 2007 at 11:37 pm

What a fantastic story!! I agree with Kimberly… I can feel it too! You are an excellent writer!

BrilligSeptember 22nd, 2007 at 11:40 pm

See, when you tell stories like this, I’m feverishly trying to figure out if I know the people in question, since your snooty private school was my snooty private school for a while in there. But I suppose I’m enough older than you (AKH! DID I JUST SAY THAT???) that I wouldn’t know these guys.

This is beautifully written, and I agree with Kim. There’s pure magic here.

Thalia's ChildSeptember 22nd, 2007 at 11:49 pm

You’ve caught that crush-yearn really well!

MiniVanDivaSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 12:39 am

Prom, Oh the Prom. The most anticipated dance in high school either ends in dramatic heartbreak or pure joy. Oh the Prom.

CorrieSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 1:09 am

These are fun to read, a little bit like time travel.

KateSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 2:35 am

*sighs happily* What a beautifully crafted story you just told . . . I can picture it in my mind . . . thanks for sharing! :)

Soccer Mom in DenialSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 8:05 am

Oh he asked you to dance?! Yeah!

nellSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 9:23 am

This story makes me melt!

Jen in MISeptember 23rd, 2007 at 1:50 pm

Lovely story. It’s sort of the perfect romantic ending. I’m looking forward to reading what happens next!

HollySeptember 23rd, 2007 at 4:39 pm

You captured the whole feeling perfectly.

Mama ZenSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 5:52 pm

Oh, I love this!

anordinarymomSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 7:28 pm

You have an amazing way with words. You definitely conveyed the magic you felt that night. Share more …

KateastropheSeptember 23rd, 2007 at 10:23 pm

Awww so great! It sounds like a dream come true and you paint the picture SO well!

DedeeSeptember 24th, 2007 at 12:10 pm

Love the magic in the air.

I also love those nights when you look fabulous and no-one can stop you!

Fourier.AnalystSeptember 25th, 2007 at 5:48 am

Great magical beginning to a tale I think we all look forward to reading more about! YAY S.O.S.!!

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