A Rocky Reminder

I don’t remember how it happened, because in my mind it only mattered that it happened.

I remember the wind tousling my hair as I gained speed, the hard black handles leaving indents in my fingers as I gripped them tightly and a sense of new found freedom. I could ride just like the big girls in our neighborhood. I stood up and forced my weight down on each pedal, wobbling with exertion to gain speed. I was invincible!

I saw the scattered construction debris on the sidewalk ahead of me and knew I could speed over it with ease. It felt bumpy at first and then a moment later the wheels were locked and skidding out of control! I opened my eyes and blinked in wonder that I was staring down at hot asphalt just inches beneath my nose. It was when I stood up that I felt the warmth and the burn. Tears were instant followed by loud 5 year old cries. Blood was streaming from my knee and my hands were burning not only from the hot asphalt but from being skinned. My mother was running toward me and in a moment had scooped me up into her arms. I looked over her shoulder and saw my bike, shiny blue in the sunlight lying on its side, wheel spinning slowly.

Once inside I was rushed to the bathroom where my father set about examining my wounds. Added to my pain was fear as I saw him pull out the tweezers and peroxide. I clutched my knee, digging my nails into the skin hard, trying to dissuade him from using those tweezers. But my pleas were ignored as I evidently had several pieces of rock ground into my knee. The ordeal ended with me being properly patched up and my father half deaf from my screaming and crying.

A week or so later as I examined my knee I noticed a very tiny hard purple fleck just beneath the skin on my knee cap. A tiny piece of rock had been missed and my skin had grown over it. As I examined the fascinating revelation, I suddenly decided that one spill on my bike wasn’t going to scare me away from riding it again.

I still have that little purple spot, though as I’ve grown it has decreased in size and is barely visible anymore. But it’s forever a reminder to me of my love for that first bike and the determination it gave me to face my fears.

This post inspired by Scribbit’s February Writing Contest

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Comments (7)

Michelle at ScribbitFebruary 5th, 2009 at 7:38 pm

Hey! Nice new template–the things you miss hiding out in the reader . . .

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KimberlyFebruary 5th, 2009 at 7:58 pm

Talk about a poignant reminder - beautiful.

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Darcie - Such The SpotFebruary 5th, 2009 at 11:26 pm

Ugh. I don’t do well with blood (AT ALL) and your description was vivid enough to give me the shivers. The purple spot really did me in…

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Gramma DuckyFebruary 7th, 2009 at 1:03 am

You just have a way of capturing your life’s memories with such vivid pictures. What a writer you are.

Charles MooreFebruary 10th, 2009 at 7:48 am

What? I missed one? Are you sure? Well, at least it serves a good purpose. Love you bunches!

ChasityFebruary 20th, 2009 at 10:13 am

What a beautiful post. I have a similar reminder on my knee, but it is a scar because I kept falling while riding around the very same corner, ripping the scab off each time. Just as the wound would heal into a dry hard scab, I’d get up enough nerve to try it again, and fall and skin the knee again. But I never gave up, and eventually I got it right because it finally did heal, leaving me a nice little scar to tell a story about. Get back up and dust yourself off and try again is a wonderful lesson.

Mozi Esme's MommyFebruary 21st, 2009 at 10:29 pm

Sounds like a great lesson learned…

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